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Title: Usotsukino - Liar
Pairing: KuroFai
Rating: PG
Circle: weekender
Raw DL: [mediafire]
Summary: Fai has changed since Kurogane first met him, changed so much that Kurogane is ready admit something to himself and to Fai.

t/n: Set in Nihon, directly after Ceres. It has the most beautiful, facial expressions. SO much thanks to [personal profile] kittenkin for offering advice and corrections on the bits that my awkward Japanese stumbled over! :DD






cover

Liar



p01

Didn't I, who had thought his psyche through beyond self-awareness,

recognize and remember that grim kind of joy?

Fai: Good morning, "Kurogane"



p02

Fai: ...behave like a wounded person
and don't wander about, too much



p03

Kurogane: ...it's already healed
Fai: There's now way it would be, right
Kurogane: What do you want?
Fai: Tomoyo-hime sends for you

Fai: It's hard to search for someone in this castle
Fai: because it's so wide and intricate

Kurogane: ...
Well... sorry 'bout that
Kurogane (thinks): She deliberately sent him out...
Kurogane (thinks): ...that bastard

Tomoyo: Ohohohohoh

sfx: snickers
Kurogane: (Hmph) ...what
Fai: ...sorry



p04

Fai: It's almost as though you were a child in this place
Fai: ...it's funny

Kurogane: ...shut up
Fai: (Hahah) You didn't deny it

Kurogane: ...
Fai: ...what?

Kurogane: ...nothing
rather than that, you got enough?
Fai: huh?
Kurogane: ...food
Fai: ahh



p05

Fai: You don't have to worry, I'll properly tell you when if I want any

Fai: On the other hand
sfx: su

Fai: If you found yourself in trouble of having too much blood left
Fai: I'd be willing to help?
sfx: pito

sfx: smile



p06

sfx: pa
Kurogane: ...if you have enough, it's fine

Fai: You should be worrying about yourself, instead of other people

If everything is fine, you laugh



p07

You didn't laugh wearing this kind of face

I couldn't help but get angry at that

How about now?


Fai: The wind is getting stronger
we should probably...

Now...



p08

Fai: ...ngh

sfx: rustle



p09

sfx: rustle



p10

Kurogane: ...it got stuck

Fai: ah...

Fai: ...
what was that about, a moment ago...

Kurogane: nothing...
I see,



p11

Kurogane: I have fallen in love with you
Kurogane: A long time before now, I guess
I have wanted him to wear this kind of expression

Fai: ...this, this is



p12

Kurogane: ... You're
this

lying magician
Kurogane: blushing pretty badly
Fai: !

*t/n: Kurogane literally says, "your hand and feet are moving together" - meaning that he's so flustered that he's not walking straight



p13

when he was touched, he would hurt,
when we were apart, he was without faith.

 

Date: 2012-01-22 09:45 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kittenkin
There's no embarrassment in not being 100% fluent in a language you're not a native speaker of, and especially with such a subtle language as Japanese! The ideograms are especially bang-head-on-wall, with all their different pronounciations, and then there's always slang and speech idiosynchrocies from character to character... @w@ You did a wonderful job translating~ I'm impressed!

Yay~ I'm glad you're not ruffled. <3

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