YES, that means I managed to pull it off! *punches air in triumph* Thanks for the feedback, I really was careful to try and not let the twin confusion bleed through before the end -- it was one of the reasons I chose Kurogane's POV, even when Fai's would have made the story more coherent.
And, wow, am I glad the feelings translated. Directly after writing, I'm still way too involved to tell how I did. *happy grin*
(OH thank you! That woman was at first a man, until then I went, "what is this fic trying to tell me, that there are no important women in the art scene?" ... *runs off to change that*)
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Date: 2011-05-24 07:07 pm (UTC)And, wow, am I glad the feelings translated. Directly after writing, I'm still way too involved to tell how I did. *happy grin*
(OH thank you! That woman was at first a man, until then I went, "what is this fic trying to tell me, that there are no important women in the art scene?" ... *runs off to change that*)