Oh, YAY! I'm so incredibly HAPPY to see this! I totally already fangirled all over this, TWICE, but now I'm going to do it again. Because you deserve it.
-Definitely loved the extra little bit you added to Fai's thoughts about Sakura being in love. It's just so BIG BROTHER-ish. It's so cute!
-Doumeki is absolutely golden. I love Doumeki so much.
-YOUR DESCRIPTIONS OMGILOVETHEMSOMUCH Kurogane's chase scene in the forest is beautiful. I love the stench, and the darkness, and the grass by the river, AND AND AND— everything. I love everything. And I love how extra-creepy it made Kyle to speak so normally after you set the scene up that way. And I know I already mentioned this at least once, but I love that moment with Fai killing rats, with the sun and the garden and Mokona...
I love you so hard. Great chapter. You worked so hard on this and I just love you!
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Date: 2011-04-24 07:16 am (UTC)-Definitely loved the extra little bit you added to Fai's thoughts about Sakura being in love. It's just so BIG BROTHER-ish. It's so cute!
-Doumeki is absolutely golden. I love Doumeki so much.
-YOUR DESCRIPTIONS OMGILOVETHEMSOMUCH
Kurogane's chase scene in the forest is beautiful. I love the stench, and the darkness, and the grass by the river, AND AND AND— everything. I love everything. And I love how extra-creepy it made Kyle to speak so normally after you set the scene up that way. And I know I already mentioned this at least once, but I love that moment with Fai killing rats, with the sun and the garden and Mokona...
I love you so hard. Great chapter. You worked so hard on this and I just love you!