(Rating will be on first part, detailed comment on here!)
Holy smokes, the details, the setting, everything, ahh! I gotta agree with Faren and Mikkeneko, this is like a work of art. That's what's cool about writing - it's using words to evoke images, emotions, etc. There's one thing about using images to convey despair...yet to use words is another. This was, wow...
I was so scared that at first Kurogane was being delusional...not realizing that you would use the Fai taking his brother's identity motif. That's really...obsessive and heartbreaking how much Yuui took on his dead brother's life to preserve him. So hard to see how painful it was for Kurogane to invest in Fai/Yuui when things were going nowhere. It's sweet how the main difference that helped Yuui come back was his lover (loved how Kurogane tries to tell Sakura "I loved..."). Things seem better in the end...but I hope someday they would be able to heal together.
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Holy smokes, the details, the setting, everything, ahh! I gotta agree with Faren and Mikkeneko, this is like a work of art. That's what's cool about writing - it's using words to evoke images, emotions, etc. There's one thing about using images to convey despair...yet to use words is another. This was, wow...
I was so scared that at first Kurogane was being delusional...not realizing that you would use the Fai taking his brother's identity motif. That's really...obsessive and heartbreaking how much Yuui took on his dead brother's life to preserve him. So hard to see how painful it was for Kurogane to invest in Fai/Yuui when things were going nowhere. It's sweet how the main difference that helped Yuui come back was his lover (loved how Kurogane tries to tell Sakura "I loved..."). Things seem better in the end...but I hope someday they would be able to heal together.