I doubt this was your intention, but I am crying right now. The descriptions of love and the way Tomoyo feels are beautiful, but it's much more than that. She's so selfless that she doesn't even see how tragic and tender this unrequited love is. It makes my heart ache that she'll feel like this her entire life, and then ache even more that she'll never see how sad that is.

The entire way you go about it, moving through these moments of Tomoyo's blossoming sexuality and slowly making her love for Sakura deeper and more complex— it all just tugs at my soul. I love the character even more after reading this story.

Dammit, are you ever going to write something that DOESN'T make me cry?