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Doujin Translation - Liar
Title: Usotsukino - Liar
Pairing: KuroFai
Rating: PG
Circle: weekender
Raw DL: [mediafire]
Summary: Fai has changed since Kurogane first met him, changed so much that Kurogane is ready admit something to himself and to Fai.
t/n: Set in Nihon, directly after Ceres. It has the most beautiful, facial expressions. SO much thanks to![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
kittenkin for offering advice and corrections on the bits that my awkward Japanese stumbled over! :DD
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Liar
p01
Didn't I, who had thought his psyche through beyond self-awareness,
recognize and remember that grim kind of joy?
Fai: Good morning, "Kurogane"
p02
Fai: ...behave like a wounded person
and don't wander about, too much
p03
Kurogane: ...it's already healed
Fai: There's now way it would be, right
Kurogane: What do you want?
Fai: Tomoyo-hime sends for you
Fai: It's hard to search for someone in this castle
Fai: because it's so wide and intricate
Kurogane: ...
Well... sorry 'bout that
Kurogane (thinks): She deliberately sent him out...
Kurogane (thinks): ...that bastard
Tomoyo: Ohohohohoh
sfx: snickers
Kurogane: (Hmph) ...what
Fai: ...sorry
p04
Fai: It's almost as though you were a child in this place
Fai: ...it's funny
Kurogane: ...shut up
Fai: (Hahah) You didn't deny it
Kurogane: ...
Fai: ...what?
Kurogane: ...nothing
rather than that, you got enough?
Fai: huh?
Kurogane: ...food
Fai: ahh
p05
Fai: You don't have to worry, I'll properly tell you when if I want any
Fai: On the other hand
sfx: su
Fai: If you found yourself in trouble of having too much blood left
Fai: I'd be willing to help?
sfx: pito
sfx: smile
p06
sfx: pa
Kurogane: ...if you have enough, it's fine
Fai: You should be worrying about yourself, instead of other people
If everything is fine, you laugh
p07
You didn't laugh wearing this kind of face
I couldn't help but get angry at that
How about now?
Fai: The wind is getting stronger
we should probably...
Now...
p08
Fai: ...ngh
sfx: rustle
p09
sfx: rustle
p10
Kurogane: ...it got stuck
Fai: ah...
Fai: ...
what was that about, a moment ago...
Kurogane: nothing...
I see,
p11
Kurogane: I have fallen in love with you
Kurogane: A long time before now, I guess
I have wanted him to wear this kind of expression
Fai: ...this, this is
p12
Kurogane: ... You're
this
lying magician
Kurogane: blushing pretty badly
Fai: !
*t/n: Kurogane literally says, "your hand and feet are moving together" - meaning that he's so flustered that he's not walking straight
p13
when he was touched, he would hurt,
when we were apart, he was without faith.
Pairing: KuroFai
Rating: PG
Circle: weekender
Raw DL: [mediafire]
Summary: Fai has changed since Kurogane first met him, changed so much that Kurogane is ready admit something to himself and to Fai.
t/n: Set in Nihon, directly after Ceres. It has the most beautiful, facial expressions. SO much thanks to
kittenkin for offering advice and corrections on the bits that my awkward Japanese stumbled over! :DDcover
Liar
p01
Didn't I, who had thought his psyche through beyond self-awareness,
recognize and remember that grim kind of joy?
Fai: Good morning, "Kurogane"
p02
Fai: ...behave like a wounded person
and don't wander about, too much
p03
Kurogane: ...it's already healed
Fai: There's now way it would be, right
Kurogane: What do you want?
Fai: Tomoyo-hime sends for you
Fai: It's hard to search for someone in this castle
Fai: because it's so wide and intricate
Kurogane: ...
Well... sorry 'bout that
Kurogane (thinks): She deliberately sent him out...
Kurogane (thinks): ...that bastard
Tomoyo: Ohohohohoh
sfx: snickers
Kurogane: (Hmph) ...what
Fai: ...sorry
p04
Fai: It's almost as though you were a child in this place
Fai: ...it's funny
Kurogane: ...shut up
Fai: (Hahah) You didn't deny it
Kurogane: ...
Fai: ...what?
Kurogane: ...nothing
rather than that, you got enough?
Fai: huh?
Kurogane: ...food
Fai: ahh
p05
Fai: You don't have to worry, I'll properly tell you when if I want any
Fai: On the other hand
sfx: su
Fai: If you found yourself in trouble of having too much blood left
Fai: I'd be willing to help?
sfx: pito
sfx: smile
p06
sfx: pa
Kurogane: ...if you have enough, it's fine
Fai: You should be worrying about yourself, instead of other people
If everything is fine, you laugh
p07
You didn't laugh wearing this kind of face
I couldn't help but get angry at that
How about now?
Fai: The wind is getting stronger
we should probably...
Now...
p08
Fai: ...ngh
sfx: rustle
p09
sfx: rustle
p10
Kurogane: ...it got stuck
Fai: ah...
Fai: ...
what was that about, a moment ago...
Kurogane: nothing...
I see,
p11
Kurogane: I have fallen in love with you
Kurogane: A long time before now, I guess
I have wanted him to wear this kind of expression
Fai: ...this, this is
p12
Kurogane: ... You're
this
lying magician
Kurogane: blushing pretty badly
Fai: !
*t/n: Kurogane literally says, "your hand and feet are moving together" - meaning that he's so flustered that he's not walking straight
p13
when he was touched, he would hurt,
when we were apart, he was without faith.
8D
Dude...I also got a hard copy of this doujin recently (out of twelve >.>) and was hoping that somehow someone (*cough*you*cough*) would translate this since I just stared at WEEKENDER's gorgeous art and wondering what's making Kurogane so pensive and rather solemn.
What's with all of these precious Nihon-setting doujins? They're so wonderful and make me want to smile and cry! And want to hug Fai because he's still struggling with his feelings and everything that happened; and also hug Kurogane because he finally confessed his feelings and is just waiting patiently for Fai.
Thanks again for translating! *hugs*
Re: 8D
I think the part I loved the most about this one was the bit of flirting that Fai did when Kurogane asked him whether he was sated - the expressions were so spot on and the way he behaved so very him that I just wanted to hug Weekender through the screen! :DD
I love their Nihon doujin, too - it's a great setting for fluff! ♥♥♥
And I'm super-glad to have been of help! :DD