http://tarmachan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tarmachan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bottan 2011-10-23 09:21 pm (UTC)

I grinned like a fool at the whole fixing the cooker scene. It was just such a great interaction between the two of them, and the intensity of the moment where he turns to find Fai's face so close... I actually found myself holding my breath there. Absolutely wonderful writing.

And I would very much like to know what Fai has made his mind up on, so off to chapter 4!

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